St Patrick

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Planning
Who St Patrick was and what he liked doing and what he didn't like doing
 - where he was born - what his family was like
He liked walking on the beach. He liked whittling his slingshot.
He hated school.
One day,
- didn't go to school    few
- went to the beach
- pirates came
- stole him and the other girls and boys
- sold him in Ireland to Milchu
- was a shepherd - looked after sheep and pigs (swine)
- started talked to God - trusted God and was happy
- One night, heard God talking to him - told him to go the a ship
- when he was on board, - big storm - ship grounded in France
- crew starving
- Patrick asked God for help
- God sent him pigs and an apple tree- ate pork dinner and apple sauce

Patrick didn't like school. Whenever his mum asked him if he was doing his homework he would lay down on his bed and say yes mum. He was born in Britten. One day  Patrick was on his way to school when he met up in between the path to sea shore and the one to school. He decided hmm well I don't want to go to school. So he skipped school and took the path to the see shore. When he got there he swung on the tree branches and skipped around. Until he froze in silent it was pirate ship. They invaded the village kids including Patrick. The Pirate dumped them into the ship as they were screaming loudly. The pirates sailed away to Island. Patrick new there scary old people there he had been wishing he went school. The pirates made the kids work for days until they got sold. Patrick lived in the kitchen of the persons house he got sold to. He lit a fire so the wolfs wouldn't come. One night Patrick woke up and heard a voice saying your ship is here its time to escape. He listened then scrammed rushing out the door he asked a nice lady for food and water. After running two hundred miles he saw a ship about leave. One of the crue mates  handed him a rope  he climbed aboard. The child and the crew had been sailing for three day once they hit middle ocean there was a storm. And their ship got grounded when they got out there and was in France. There was no food or water they starved for days wanting food and water. One day the pirates said I thought god cared for us just then Patrick kneeled down and prayed. Just then a heard of wild pigs came and juicy apples and now they were feed and one day Patrick would go to his family again.